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本期作者：张婷婷
2023年6月3日雅思大作文题目
Doctors encourage older people to take regular exercise, but few of them take enough physical exercise. What are the causes and what can be done to encourage them to take exercise?(2023/06/03)
范文及解析
Introduction
Taking regular exercise, as is universally acknowledged,plays midwife tohelping old people keep physical fitness, while most of them, in spite of strong recommendation from doctors, still fail to take ample exercises. Behind such aticklishproblem, from my own perspective, are three predominant factors andviablesolutions are in desperate need toavertthebleakfuture.
解析
本次task 2是新考题，但是整体难度并不大，审题注意限定词older people；
❖ play midwife to v.促成;帮助；
❖ ticklish adj.不安定的；难对付的；
❖ viable adj.可望成功的，切实可行的；
❖ avert v.防止，避免；
❖ bleak adj.不乐观的；
Body 1
Primarily, much as many elders are pleased to enjoy their twilight years, it does not lookfeasiblesince most youngsters, bread winners in families,are swamped withwork under thiscut-throatcompetition,under which circumstance, their parents will voluntarily help them with chores andminister totheir grandchildren. Consequently, hardly do they have sufficient time to take sports. Another major contributing factor would have much to do with the transformed lifestyles of the elderly. Unlike the past when people have limited forms of entertainment, the current digital erais saturated with intriguingactivities, ranging from surfing the internet to shooting off to see amusing videos, which tightlygripthe old's attention. Benefited from its online convenience and diversity, the old willbe indisposed tostep out for exercises. Undeniable is also the fact that the lack oftailoredrecreationalamenitiesin thevicinityof residence willdampenthe the old's zeal for taking sports. To illustrate, with a swimming pool being kilometers away, swimming would only be a wild wish.
解析
Causes：
(1)年轻人忙碌，老人需要帮助照顾家庭，带孩子；
(2)老人在现代生活中的生活方式也有明显变化；
(3)缺乏适合老年人运动锻炼的基础设施；
❖ feasible adj.可行的，办得到的；
❖ be swamped with v.忙着做;忙的一塌糊涂；
❖ cut-throat adj.（竞争）残酷的，激烈的；
❖ minister to v.照顾；援助；
❖ be saturated with v.使充满，使饱和；
❖ intriguing adj.非常有趣的，引人入胜的；
❖ grip v.使感兴趣，吸引住（某人）的注意；
❖ be indisposed to v.不愿意；
❖ tailor v.定做；迎合，使适应；
❖ amenity n.便利设施；
❖ vicinity n.周围地区，邻近地区，附近；
❖ dampen v.减弱，抑制；
Body 2
In order to address thepricklyproblem of inadequate physical exercise among elderly, the government should play a leading role byearmarkingfunds toprofferingmore age-appropriate sports facilities with either installing handrails or perfecting walking path ,which are expected to give the old easier access to recreational areas, opening up more opportunities for them to join in activities like jogging and hiking. Apart from fiscal policy from the government,disseminatinginformation through public service advertising, community centers and senior organizations is also oftangible boonsin boosting the awareness concerning the significance of physical health. Besides, young adults, instead of beingboomerang children, are supposed to shoulder more family responsibility for the care of older people is firmly within the domain of the family.
解析
Solutions：
(1)政府起主导作用，投资完善运动设施，定制一些适合老年人锻炼的器材；
(2)宣传以提升老人锻炼的思想意识；
(3)年轻人要学会承担更大的家庭责任；
❖ prickly adj.多刺的；棘手的；
❖ earmark vt.指定……的用途；划拨（款项）；
❖ proffer v.递上；提供，提出；
❖ disseminate v.散布，传播（信息、知识等）；
❖ tangible adj.明确的，真实的；
❖ boon n.裨益，优势，有用的东西；
❖ boomerang children 回归子女；啃老族；
Conclusion
In conclusion, barriers for the lack of sufficient exercise among the older individuals are various and the thorny issue should not be downplayed. By tailoring exercise facilities and elevating their awareness, older generations will be more likely to engage in regular physical activities.
解析
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