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2019年下半年英语六级考试刚结束不久,文都网校四六级教研老师针对英语六级作文这部分进行了深度解析,来为大家分析考情,让2020年备考考生有思路。

  2019年12月英语六级作文出题回顾总结

今年六级作文的主题是固定命题,主题为家庭/社会/团体责任感的重要性要求同学们写一篇150字到180字的短文。关于“重要性”类的文章,同学们可以从多个角度进行延伸,但三段的格式要准确,以及字数要把握住,争取作文所用句式准确,用词恰当,有话说不跑题应该还是会得到一个满意的分数。

六级作文首段的作用就是引出主题,加上自己对主题的观点,句子数量不宜过多,控制在30字左右即可,如:毫无疑问,人们越来越重视家庭/社会/团体责任感的重要性,即:there is no doubt that people attach much importance on the role of the sense of the family/society/community responsibility;或者:不可否认的是,家庭/社会/团体责任感在人们的生活中扮演着极为重要的角色,即:the sense of the family/society/community responsibility has increasingly played significant role in people’s life。中间段可以展开强调重要性的原因,运用平时积累的内涵句式进行表达,也可以围绕三个中心论题展开,及采取措施和行动,但要注意中间逻辑连接词的使用,切忌不分层次的展开。如:There are many reasons explaining____.The main reason is_______.What is more________.Thirdly_____.As a result______.Considering all there,___________.For one thing________, for another____________。尾段可以进行总结,或者根据自己的论点和论据展望下未来,尤其是本次论题是强调重要性的书写,因此可以提倡该精神。如:综上,我们应该尽量去宣扬家庭/社会/团体责任感的重要性。即:as the fact we has discussed above, we should do our best to advocate the sense of the family/society/community responsibility among the public。结尾还可以作出美好展望:只有这样,我们的社会才会更美,即:only in this way, can our society keep a better society to live in。

  2019年12月英语六级作文真题参考范文解析

  【范文一】社会责任感

【六级作文真题原文】

Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write an essay on the importance of having a sense of social responsibility. You should write at least 150 words but no more than 200 words.

【六级作文参考范文】

There is no doubt in saying that having a strong sense of responsibility is of great significance for social harmony, which should not be ignored by the young generation.

However, with the increasingly fierce competition in modern society,

a growing number of youngsters tend to be under tremendous pressure. As a result, they are more likely to focus on their own short-term interests, ignoring the value of social responsibility. A case in point is the decline of social ethics and morality. As a matter of fact, nowadays, a number of citizens are not willing to help others who are in need of help and indifferent to their suffering. If we left the current situation alone, hardly could we live in a harmonious and loving society.

In conclusion, it is imperative to take some corresponding measures . For one thing, the mass media should enhance the publicity, enlightening the young as to cultivating strong sense of social responsibility. For another, it is advisable that individuals should pay more attention to what will benefit us all in the future.

【参考范文译文】

毫无疑问,社会责任感对社会和谐非常重要,而这不应该被年轻的一代人遗忘。

然而,随着当代社会竞争日益激烈,越来越多的年轻人面临巨大的压力。结果,他们往往只在乎自己的短期利益,忽视社会责任感的价值。以道德下滑为例,事实上,目前,很多市民不愿意帮助处境困难的人,对他们的遭遇十分冷漠。如果我们放任这个现状,我们无法生活在和谐友爱的社会。

总之,是时候采取些行动了。一方面,大众传媒应该加大宣传,启迪培养年轻人强烈的社会责任感。另一方面,人们应该更多的关注长远利益。

  【范文二】家庭责任感的重要性

【真题原文】

Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write an essay on the importance of having a sense of family responsibility. You should write at least 150 words but no more than 200 words.

【参考范文】

As we grow up and our parents are getting aged, there is a an increasing international awareness of the importance of having a sense of family responsibility.

Why should we have a sense of family responsibility in modern society? The reasons, which are obvious to all, can be listed as follows: on the one hand, a sense of family responsibility plays an essential role in personal growth, or put it another way,without it, hardly can any individual be really successful. On the other hand, the difference between a man who succeeds and one who does not mainly lies in the fact whether or not he could own the sense of family responsibility, and a man with that spirit usually could think twice before make any important decisions.

To sum up, We should do our utmost to advocate the sense of family responsibility. Only in this way can our society become a better place for us to live in.

【参考范文译文】

随着我们长大,父母也上了年纪,我们应该越来越重视家庭责任感的重要性。

为什么我们要这么做吗?理由很明显,如下:一方面,家庭责任感在个人成长中十分重要,换言之,没有这种责任感,一个人很难真正的取得成功。另一方面,判断一个人是否成功的标准主要取决于他是否有家庭责任感,当一个人具有这种精神时,他往往能在做任何重大决定之前都能三思后行。

总的来说,我们应该尽我们最大的努力去宣扬家庭责任感,只有这样,我们社会才会变得更美好。

  【范文三】集体责任感

【题目要求】

Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write an essay on the importance of having a sense of community responsibility. You should write at least 150 words but no more than 200 words.

【参考范文】

There is no doubt that community responsibility plays an indispensable role in personal development, for instance, in the workplace.

There are several factors accounting for this perspective and the following are the most typical ones. First and foremost, a strong sense of community responsibility is helpful to develop harmonious interpersonal relationships. As we all know, we are very likely to spend more time with our colleagues than our families after entering the workplace. Therefore, the sound working atmosphere and interpersonal relationships among employees are crucial to both physical and mental pleasure. In addition, community responsibility can improve efficiency. In the fast-paced modern society, time is money and efficiency holds the key to saving time. As the saying goes, two heads are better than one. So great importance should be attached to the cultivation of the sense of community responsibility and we will eventually benefit from it.

From what has been mentioned above, we can come to the conclusion that the sense of community responsibility is a kind of good personal quality, which deserves our attention.

【参考译文】

毫无疑问,集体责任在个人发展中起着不可或缺的作用,例如在工作场所。

支持这一观点的原因有很多,但以下原因是最典型的。首先,强烈的社区责任感有助于培养和谐的人际关系。我们都知道,进入职场后,与同事相处的时间很可能比与家人相处的时间更多。因此,良好的工作氛围和员工之间的人际关系对大家的身心愉悦至关重要。此外,集体责任意识可以提高效率。在快节奏的现代社会,时间就是金钱,而效率是节约时间的关键。俗话说,三个臭皮匠,顶个诸葛亮。因此,我们应该高度重视集体责任感的培养,而且我们自己将最终会从中受益。

综上所述,我们可以得出结论,集体责任感是一种良好的个人品质,值得我们的关注。